Critique: Chris Ferguson Pace

 

In this animation, the character is walking at an unrealistically slow pace.  The characters eyes are awkwardly blinking at different times and at a slow pace which is awkward and really distracts the viewer from what is actually going on in the animation.  Also, the character needs more movement in the hips, shoulders and back.  During certain steps it is clear that the characters feet are not on the ground at all and he is floating.  This kills the reality of the animation and doesn’t convince anybody that this is a live character.

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About JamesWrobel

I'm a junior at Alfred State College majoring in Digital Media and Animation. I specialize in digital art and photography rather than drawing and painting. It's a work in progress and I'm working hard to achieve my dreams.
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